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 Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015

Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015

 Rolinda O Espanola, poet

Rolinda O Espanola, poet

 Rolinda's poem, My Wish

Rolinda's poem, My Wish

 Grimaldi Nora Rioflorido, poet

Grimaldi Nora Rioflorido, poet

 Mohan Khan, poet

Mohan Khan, poet

 Ratini, poet

Ratini, poet

 Hou Wei, poet

Hou Wei, poet

 Banglar poets

Banglar poets

 N Rangarajan, poet

N Rangarajan, poet

 Sandeep Kaur, poet

Sandeep Kaur, poet

 Pujiati, poet

Pujiati, poet

 Glory Ann R Balista, poet

Glory Ann R Balista, poet

 Monir Ahmod (Shromik), poet

Monir Ahmod (Shromik), poet

 Guan Zhiqiang, poet

Guan Zhiqiang, poet

 Amrakajona Zakir, poet

Amrakajona Zakir, poet

 Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015

Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015

 Sharasyamsi Yahya, poet

Sharasyamsi Yahya, poet

 Rolinda O Espanola, poet

Rolinda O Espanola, poet

 Zhang Haitao, poet

Zhang Haitao, poet

 Banglar Kantha fashion show

Banglar Kantha fashion show

 Alvin Pang, one of the judges

Alvin Pang, one of the judges

 AKM Mohsin, Alvin Pang, Amrakajona Zakir (1st Prize) & Shivaji Das

AKM Mohsin, Alvin Pang, Amrakajona Zakir (1st Prize) & Shivaji Das

 Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015  Rolinda O Espanola, poet  Rolinda's poem, My Wish  Grimaldi Nora Rioflorido, poet  Mohan Khan, poet  Ratini, poet  Hou Wei, poet  Banglar poets  N Rangarajan, poet  Sandeep Kaur, poet  Pujiati, poet  Glory Ann R Balista, poet  Monir Ahmod (Shromik), poet  Guan Zhiqiang, poet  Amrakajona Zakir, poet  Migrant Worker Poetry Competition 2015  Sharasyamsi Yahya, poet  Rolinda O Espanola, poet  Zhang Haitao, poet  Banglar Kantha fashion show  Alvin Pang, one of the judges  AKM Mohsin, Alvin Pang, Amrakajona Zakir (1st Prize) & Shivaji Das

Second Migrant Workers Poetry Competition

December 15, 2015 in Singapore, #SGLit


The Second Migrant Workers Poetry Competition was held on 13 December 2015 at the National Library. 

It was standing room only with over 200 people attending - a much bigger crowd than last year. This year there were over 74 entries - 65% female, many mothers. The 14 finalists included Banglar and Chinese construction workers and domestic workers, from Indonesia, India, the Philippines, China and Bangladesh.

I sat next to one of the finalists, Rolinda from Bacalog City, who read her poem to her seven year old daughter, My Wish, from a frog exercise book given to her by the 5 year old son of her Singaporean employers. 

Invisibility and transformation were some of the themes mentioned by Shivaji Das, one of the organisers, Kirpal Singh, one of the judges, and Debbie Fordyce from TWC2.

Alvin Pang, another of the judges - whose poem Made of Gold, concerns the deceptions involved in the migrant worker experience, said about the poetry we heard, “We cannot even pretend to begin to know what’s going on. We can only begin to understand the blindness that has afflicted us for so long, so much that we do not know and do not see among us.”

Stories continue to swirl around us, obscured by images of ourselves ...
 

Tags: Singapore, poetry, Migrant workers, HOME, Alvin Pang, Singapore Writers
 National Gallery Singapore

National Gallery Singapore

 Information Desk

Information Desk

 Kid not looking at Red Morning Glory & Rotten Gun by Pratuang Emjaroen

Kid not looking at Red Morning Glory & Rotten Gun by Pratuang Emjaroen

 Epic Poem of Malaya by Chua Mia Tee

Epic Poem of Malaya by Chua Mia Tee

 Looking at Hendra Gunawan's War and Peace

Looking at Hendra Gunawan's War and Peace

 In front of Rama, Sita & Laksamana in the Forest by Anak Agung Gde Meregeg

In front of Rama, Sita & Laksamana in the Forest by Anak Agung Gde Meregeg

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 Kid beside Boschbrand (Forest Fire) by Raden Saleh

Kid beside Boschbrand (Forest Fire) by Raden Saleh

 Lady walking away from Raden Saleh's volcanoes

Lady walking away from Raden Saleh's volcanoes

 Kid not looking at paintings

Kid not looking at paintings

 What does it all mean?

What does it all mean?

 People looking at Wu Guanzhong's paintings

People looking at Wu Guanzhong's paintings

 Georgette Chen's husband & self portraits

Georgette Chen's husband & self portraits

 Overlooking the Padang with a view of The Esplanade & Marina Bay

Overlooking the Padang with a view of The Esplanade & Marina Bay

 National Gallery Singapore  Information Desk  Kid not looking at Red Morning Glory & Rotten Gun by Pratuang Emjaroen  Epic Poem of Malaya by Chua Mia Tee  Looking at Hendra Gunawan's War and Peace  In front of Rama, Sita & Laksamana in the Forest by Anak Agung Gde Meregeg NGS Nov 2015-7.jpg  Kid beside Boschbrand (Forest Fire) by Raden Saleh  Lady walking away from Raden Saleh's volcanoes  Kid not looking at paintings  What does it all mean?  People looking at Wu Guanzhong's paintings  Georgette Chen's husband & self portraits  Overlooking the Padang with a view of The Esplanade & Marina Bay

National Gallery Singapore

December 09, 2015 in Singapore, #SGLit

The National Gallery Singapore is impressive. Well worth a visit - and not just for the building and the paintings and other art works - but for the people too.

The City Hall Chamber, where the Japanese formally signed the surrender documents at the end of WW2 before Lord Mountbatten, holds particular significance for me because it's there I presented a workshop on Accounting for Lawyers over 10 years ago.

In other news I wrote a brief Postcard from Singapore on #SGlit for the SA Writers Centre:

'Located at the hub of so many social, historical, economic and political cross currents, Singapore literature reflects a mix of themes and narratives. There is a tension and play between the past (paved over and reconstructed) and the future, security and adventure, individual identity and authority, self expression, authenticity and national imperatives.'

'In many ways my own hybrid identity and origins – a Eurasian, born in England, growing up in Adelaide, living in Asia for over 15 years – mirror these themes. The stories in my book, We Rose Up Slowly set in Singapore, Australia and Jakarta are a mash up of these influences too.'

'Singapore literature is so much more than the bling saturated materialism of Kevin Kwan and the reductive simplifications I’ve set out here. It’s challenging to do justice to the depth of Singapore literature in English without even mentioning drama, let alone the literature of the other Singaporean national languages (Malay, Tamil and Mandarin). Nevertheless, I would encourage readers and writers who ordinarily look to New York or London for inspiration to look closer to home, to Singapore, and the surprising amount of quality literature in English produced in Asia.'

The same can now be said about Southeast Asian art. The National Gallery Singapore is a significant cultural achievement. Art lovers here now have a world class museum to explore and find inspiration.

Tags: Singapore, Art, Writing
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 Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan

Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan

 Cyril Wong & Sheo Rai

Cyril Wong & Sheo Rai

 Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan

Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan

 Kenny, Sheo & Cyril

Kenny, Sheo & Cyril

BooksActually Nov 2015-4.jpg  Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan  Cyril Wong & Sheo Rai  Kenny Leck & Corrie Tan  Kenny, Sheo & Cyril

10 Years for Books Actually at The Substation

December 06, 2015 in Singapore, #SGLit

BooksActually held its 10 Year Anniversary exhibition at The Substation between 16 to 20 November 2015.

I first entered BooksActually when it was in Club Street in early 2010. The first book I bought was on Joseph Cornell - little did I know Kenny was an artist and creator of his own boxes. 

I began to write again in 2010 when at BooksActually I saw a copy of Ceriph Issue Zero. I decided to submit a story I wrote in 1997 called We Rose Up Slowly. Much to my surprise and joy, the story was accepted for Ceriph Issue One. That story leads my debut collection We Rose Up Slowly.

If it wasn’t for BooksActually and its publishing arm, Math Paper Press, I would never have written the stories published in We Rose Up Slowly.

So lets celebrate this place that is a Singapore institution for independent thought and creativity.

Tags: SGLit, BooksActually, Singapore Writers
Kids, Lenteng Agung Oct 2015

Kids, Lenteng Agung Oct 2015

Kids, Lenteng Agung & Lady with a Lapdog

November 28, 2015 in Indonesia, Writing

Notes on Lady with a Lapdog by Anton Chekhov

The plot is basic, plain, a simple story of a romantic affair. There are only two characters, Gurov, who changes over the course of the story and Anna who is a fairly flat character. So why do I think this is such a great short story?

1) The story highlights: 

a) the theme of the secret, authentic, inner life kept hidden from the world
b) the tension and duality between:

- superficial, practical, everyday ordinary surfaces, perceptions with no depth, impressions with little deeper understanding. How we present ourselves to the world and how we care to be seen.
 versus
- the complexity of the protagonist’s hidden inner world, where the vulnerable, sacred, secret self is preserved. This is the place of deep desire and yearning, holy in the sense of being the core of identity and individual uniqueness. 

Chekhov shows us in LWAL that love is about sharing this secret, sacred side with another person, and there is risk and uncertainty in this revelation.
 
2) The following key passage in the story highlights the key themes of LWAL: 

”He had two lives: one, open, seen and known by all who cared to know, full of relative truth and of relative falsehood, exactly like the lives of his friends and acquaintances; and another life, running its course in secret. And through some strange, perhaps accidental, conjunction of circumstances, everything that was essential, of interest, and of value to him, everything in which he was sincere and did not deceive himself, everything that made the kernel of his life, was hidden from other people; and all that was false in him, the sheath in which he hid himself to conceal the truth—such, for instance, as his work in the bank, his discussions at the club, his “lower race,” his presence with his wife at anniversary festivities—all that was open. And he judged of others by himself, not believing in what he saw, and always believing that every man had his real, most interesting life under the cover of secrecy and under the cover of night."

3) The tension between the ‘secret’ and the ‘presented self’ are negotiated and played out in the events that make up LWAL.

4) This tension is occurring in Gurov, the male protagonist’s head. The story goes further and shows not just the fact of this tension but Gurov’s self awareness of this tension. Gurov is questioning whether he is truly in love or in love with a romantic fantasy. He agonizes over the division he senses in himself and right up until the last lines he is questioning if, and how he can keep, his love genuine and surviving the world.

5) The ending is uncertain and inconclusive. There is no real climax. No point. This was new and very different to Tolstoy & Dostoevsky's rebirth and resurrection endings. Some readers don't like the ending because it hangs & its unclear what happens to the characters and their relationship. But this is the whole point. It's more real and authentic. Because love is uncertain and requires maintenance, hard work and honesty. 

At the end of the 19th century it's no longer enough for everybody to end up 'happily ever after' with the light of revelation from a divine source or fate, and the pretence that duality does not exist. The 20th century requires new 'truths' and honesty about the complexity, uncertain and fragile nature of life and love, and the inner life.

Do they love each other and will their relationship last? The character of the male protagonist is analysed. There is self reflection and questioning. This is done so well that it is clear the character does not know himself whether he is in love. "But his actions show that the lady is more than a plaything and that there is something more than fascination, pleasure or entertainment between them."

6) Charles May, the academic, blogger and short story expert writes:

"What makes the story so subtle and complex is that Chekhov presents the romance in such an understated and objective way that we realize there is no way to determine whether it is love or romance, for there is no way to distinguish between them. Although Gurov feels that he has a life open and seen, full of relative truth and falsehood like everyone else, he knows he has another life running its course in secret, a true life, and the false only was open to others. "All personal life," he feels, "rested on secrecy.""

So the mystery at the heart of LWAL is whether he really loves her or not. At the end Gurov doesn’t know himself but he has changed something has changed. Is it love or something less than love but better than before?

7) Chekhov’s achievement is in showing the journey Gurov takes from ladykiller to ‘possible’ genuine lover and showing this inner tension, the self-reflection, the psychology, the possibility of failure without being too explicit or inevitable and layering the story with ambiguity, signs and symbols to highlight this theme. 

8) Gurov’s epiphany is taking place over the course of the whole story. Gurov’s reflections on his feelings for Anna are the cause of his epiphany. At the ending there is ‘momentary sacredness’ for Gurov. But it is unclear whether and how this ‘love’/exposure of the sacred self will endure

9) Charles May again:

“At the end of the story, Gurov and Anna wonder how they can free themselves from their intolerable bondage, but only Chekhov and the reader are aware that there is no way to free themselves, for the real bondage is not the manifest one, but the latent bondage all human beings have to the dilemma of never knowing which is the true self and which is the false one. Although it seems to the couple that they would soon find the solution and a new and splendid life would begin, at the same time it is clear to them that they had a long way to go and that the most complicated part of it was only just beginning. Indeed, what seems so simple is indeed complicated.”  

10) Short Story ‘Recalcitrance’: at the ending of LWAL there is an illusion of closure i.e. it appears Gurov and Anna are together and in love - this could be an illusion, we don’t know if what we have read is a true exposure/revelation of the inner self of Gurov or a sham. Has Gurov really changed, perhaps he doesn't even know the answer to this question himself?

11) Chekhov nails what it is to be human and living in the modern world i.e. we have double lives, we behave in certain ways to earn a living and take a place in ‘society’. We sublimate our inner self to survive and rarely reveal what we’d really like to do to be fulfilled. Perhaps the only truly happy individuals are those with the courage and strength to let their inner life play out in their everyday external life. 

12) The short story explores this theme better than the novel - because a partial examination of a life story arc results in a more forensic concentrated attention - less is more – there is a focus and intensity of the gaze in a short story which is often diluted or dissipates over the course of a novel. LWAL is a good example where brevity and descriptive clarity allow for greater precision, experimentation and attitude. These aspects of the story are more sustainable and carry a greater intensity over a shorter rather than a longer time span.

13) LWAL is mysterious and complex and you can return to it again and again.

Charles May again : “As Eudora Welty once said, "The first thing we see about a story is its mystery. And in the best stories, we return at the last to see mystery again. Every good story has mystery--not the puzzle kind, but the mystery of allurement. As we understand the story better, it is likely that the mystery does not necessarily decrease; rather it simply grows more beautiful. More so than in the novel, the short story most often deals with phenomena for which there is no clearly discernible logical, sociological, or psychological cause. As Welty says, the "first thing we notice about our story is that we can't really see the solid outlines of it--it seems bathed in something of its own. It is wrapped in an atmosphere. This is what makes it shine, perhaps, as well as what initial obscures its plain, real shape."”

14) Charles May:

“In Chekhov’s great story, “Lady with the Dog,” The secrecy of Gurov’s idealized desire constitutes true reality for him, just as the sacred constituted true reality for primitive man and woman. Indeed, in the modern short story, idealized human desire--unsayable, unrealizable, always hovering, like religious experience in the realm of the "not yet"--replaces the sacred revelation embodied in primal short-fiction forms. As the couple sit looking at the sea, Gurov feels that “in reality everything is beautiful in this world when one reflects: everything except what we think or do ourselves…” When Anna leaves, Gurov thinks it has been just another episode or adventure in his life, nothing left but a memory that would visit him only from time to time. But she haunts him, and he imagines her to be lovelier and himself to be finer than they actually were in Yalta. The story ends with the couple agonizing about how to avoid the secrecy and to be free of their intolerable bondage. “How? How?” Gurov asks. But, of course there is no answer, no way that the romantic, spiritual ideal they store up in their ghostly hearts can ever be actualized, except, of course, as it is manifested in the short story—as the immanent, the liminal, the “not yet.””

15) Look at how Chekhov's unadorned descriptions of carpet and rooms point to the state of mind. How even the phrase 'the sturgeon was smelly.' reveals how shallow and foolish those are around him who cannot know how he feels inside.

16) Negatives: Anna, the female character is flat, a tool for exploration of male. So the story is very male centric and sexist as women are seen to be inferior. But Gurov recognises or at least has in his psychology that this surface judgment is inadequate and is an obstacle to love and connection. For balance maybe we should read Joyce Carol Oates' version from Anna's POV.

17) Vladimir Nabokov thought LWAL was one of the greatest stories ever. Nabokov said:

"Chekhov was the first among writers to rely so much upon the undercurrents of suggestion to convey a definite meaning."

"Chekhov could never write a good long novel — he was a sprinter, not a stayer. He could not, it seems, hold long enough in focus the pattern of life that his genius perceived here and there: he could retain it in its patchy vividness just long enough to make a short story out of it, but it refused to keep bright and detailed as it should keep if it had to be turned into a long and sustained novel."

18) Nabokov's points on LWAL:

"We will now repeat the different features that are typical for this and other Chekhov tales.

"First: The story is told in the most natural way possible, not beside the after-dinner fireplace as with Turgenevor Maupassant but in the way one person relates to another the most important things in his life, slowly and yet without a break, in a slightly subdued voice.

"Second: Exact and rich characterization is attained by a careful selection and careful distribution of minute but striking features, with perfect contempt for the sustained description, repetition, and strong emphasis of ordinary authors. In this or that description one detail is chosen to illume the whole setting."

"Third: There is no special moral to be drawn and no special message to be received. Compare this to the special delivery stories of Gorki or Thomas Mann."

"Fourth :The story is based on a system of waves, on the shades of this or that mood. If in Gorki's world the molecules forming it are matter, here, in Chekhov, we get a world of waves instead of particles of matter, which, incidentally, is a nearer approach to the modern scientific understanding of the universe."

"Fifth: The contrast of poetry and prose stressed here and there with such insight and humor is, in the long run, a contrast only for the heroes; in reality we feel, and this is again typical of authentic genius, that for Chekhov the lofty and the base are not different, that the slice of watermelon and the violet sea, and the hands of the town-governor, are essential points of the "beauty plus pity" of the world."

"Sixth: The story does not really end, for as long as people are alive, there is no possible and definite conclusion to their troubles or hopes or dreams."

"Seventh: The storyteller seems to keep going out of his way to allude to trifles, every one of which in another type of story would mean a signpost denoting a turn in the action — for instance, the two boys at the theatre would be eavesdroppers, and rumors would spread, or the inkstand would mean a letter changing the course of the story; but just because these trifles are meaningless, they are all-important in giving the real atmosphere of this particular story."
 

Tags: Indonesia, Lenteng Agung, Jakarta, kids, Chekhov, Short Stories
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 Kamila needs a haircut

Kamila needs a haircut

 Kamila has a haircut at Tante Rambut Merah's salon 

Kamila has a haircut at Tante Rambut Merah's salon 

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon

 Tante Rambut Merah cleaning up after the cut

Tante Rambut Merah cleaning up after the cut

 After the haircut: Kamila & Wawa

After the haircut: Kamila & Wawa

 Kamila needs a haircut  Kamila has a haircut at Tante Rambut Merah's salon   Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Kamila at Tante Rambut Merah's salon  Tante Rambut Merah cleaning up after the cut  After the haircut: Kamila & Wawa

Kamila Getting a Haircut

November 24, 2015 in Family & Friends, Favourites, Indonesia

This is a photo story of our niece, Kamila, getting a haircut in October 2015.

 Jason Eric Lundberg, Gwee Li Sui, Laremy Lee & Richard Angus Whitehead discuss Big Mole

Jason Eric Lundberg, Gwee Li Sui, Laremy Lee & Richard Angus Whitehead discuss Big Mole

 Jeremy Tiang, Yong Shu Hoong, Stephanie Ye & O Thiam Chin on Literary Reviews

Jeremy Tiang, Yong Shu Hoong, Stephanie Ye & O Thiam Chin on Literary Reviews

 Question from Zhang Ruihe

Question from Zhang Ruihe

 O Thiam Chin & Aaron Lee

O Thiam Chin & Aaron Lee

 Contemplating a career in politics perhaps?

Contemplating a career in politics perhaps?

 Christian Bok Goes Interstellar

Christian Bok Goes Interstellar

 Among Us: Migrant Poets moderated by Alvin Pang

Among Us: Migrant Poets moderated by Alvin Pang

 Among Us: Migrant Poets

Among Us: Migrant Poets

 Among Us: Migrant Poets

Among Us: Migrant Poets

 Among Us: Migrant Poets

Among Us: Migrant Poets

 Lamppost by Mohmir

Lamppost by Mohmir

 Lamppost by Mohmir

Lamppost by Mohmir

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 Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari

Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari

 Amir Muhammad, Faizal Tehran & Kwok Kian Woon

Amir Muhammad, Faizal Tehran & Kwok Kian Woon

 Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari

Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari

 Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon on their 'weird' writing

Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon on their 'weird' writing

 Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon

Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon

 The Closing Debate with Joshua Ip

The Closing Debate with Joshua Ip

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 Closing Debate with Hirzi Zulkiflie

Closing Debate with Hirzi Zulkiflie

 Closing Debate with Shamini Flint

Closing Debate with Shamini Flint

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 Closing Debate with Adrian Tan

Closing Debate with Adrian Tan

 Jason Eric Lundberg, Gwee Li Sui, Laremy Lee & Richard Angus Whitehead discuss Big Mole  Jeremy Tiang, Yong Shu Hoong, Stephanie Ye & O Thiam Chin on Literary Reviews  Question from Zhang Ruihe  O Thiam Chin & Aaron Lee  Contemplating a career in politics perhaps?  Christian Bok Goes Interstellar  Among Us: Migrant Poets moderated by Alvin Pang  Among Us: Migrant Poets  Among Us: Migrant Poets  Among Us: Migrant Poets  Lamppost by Mohmir  Lamppost by Mohmir SWF Oct Nov 2015-58.jpg  Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari  Amir Muhammad, Faizal Tehran & Kwok Kian Woon  Faizal Tehrani, Annaliza Bakri & Emelda Jumari  Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon on their 'weird' writing  Yeow Kai Chai, Christian Bok & Desmond Kon  The Closing Debate with Joshua Ip SWF Oct Nov 2015-66.jpg  Closing Debate with Hirzi Zulkiflie  Closing Debate with Shamini Flint SWF Oct Nov 2015-68.jpg  Closing Debate with Adrian Tan

Singapore Writers Festival 2015 - the last few days

November 23, 2015 in Writing, Singapore, #SGLit

These are my images from the sessions I attended at Singapore Writers Festival on 4 to 8 Nov 2015.

Images from my first few days at Singapore Writers Festival on 31 Oct to 1 Nov 2015 are here.

Tags: SWF, SingaporeWritersFestival, Writers, Singapore Writers
Frenchman, Tour d'Eiffel, Paris, August 2008

Frenchman, Tour d'Eiffel, Paris, August 2008

Paris, France

November 14, 2015

Je me mire et me vois ange! et je meurs, et j'aime
—Que la vitre soit l'art, soit la mysticité—
A renaître, portant mon rêve en diadème,
Au ciel antérieur où fleurit la Beauté.

I can see my reflection like that of an angel!
And I feel that I am dying, and, through the medium
Of art or of mystical experience, I want to be reborn,
Wearing my dream like a diadem, in some better land
Where beauty flourishes.

Stéphane Mallarmé, Les Fenetres

Tags: Paris, poetry
 Raising the profile of Asian literature

Raising the profile of Asian literature

 Laksmi Pamuntjak, Linh Dinh & Desmond Kon

Laksmi Pamuntjak, Linh Dinh & Desmond Kon

 Eun Heekyung & Koh Jee Leong

Eun Heekyung & Koh Jee Leong

 Launch of Deeds of Light & The End Comes Reaching

Launch of Deeds of Light & The End Comes Reaching

 Joshua Ip moderating David Wong & Tse Hao Guan 

Joshua Ip moderating David Wong & Tse Hao Guan 

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 Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip plotting the downfall of nations

Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip plotting the downfall of nations

 Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip

Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip

 Kenny Leck & Sarah Tang aka Wednesday Addams

Kenny Leck & Sarah Tang aka Wednesday Addams

 Hau Huang & David signing their debut poetry collections

Hau Huang & David signing their debut poetry collections

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 Words over Water with Ghazali Muzak, Michael Cheng, Verena Tay & Dee Palanisamy

Words over Water with Ghazali Muzak, Michael Cheng, Verena Tay & Dee Palanisamy

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 MIchael Cheng

MIchael Cheng

 Verena Tay

Verena Tay

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 Michael Cheng

Michael Cheng

 Verena Tay & her mother

Verena Tay & her mother

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 Words over Water

Words over Water

 Short does not mean easy

Short does not mean easy

 Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden

Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden

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 Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden

Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden

 Anthology of Short Stories by NAC ITBM Yayasan Obor

Anthology of Short Stories by NAC ITBM Yayasan Obor

 It Never Rains on National Day

It Never Rains on National Day

 Jeremy Tiang, Desmond Kon & Joshua Ip

Jeremy Tiang, Desmond Kon & Joshua Ip

 Verena Tay

Verena Tay

 Kenny Chan & Alvin Pang

Kenny Chan & Alvin Pang

 Alvin Pang, co-editor of Union

Alvin Pang, co-editor of Union

 UNION with Fong Hoe Fang, Alvin Pang & Ravi Shankar

UNION with Fong Hoe Fang, Alvin Pang & Ravi Shankar

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 Ravi Shankar & Chandran Nair

Ravi Shankar & Chandran Nair

 Andy Ang

Andy Ang

 Annaliza Bakri reads Mohamed Latiff Mohamed

Annaliza Bakri reads Mohamed Latiff Mohamed

 Rafaat Haji Hamzah

Rafaat Haji Hamzah

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 Verena Tay

Verena Tay

 Ann Ang

Ann Ang

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 Jason Erik Lundberg

Jason Erik Lundberg

 Bashir Basalamah & his daughter

Bashir Basalamah & his daughter

 Jerrold Yam & Desmond Kon in conversation ... something about conceptual poetry (the prose writer's eyes glazed over)

Jerrold Yam & Desmond Kon in conversation ... something about conceptual poetry (the prose writer's eyes glazed over)

 Lontar Launch with Jason Erik Lundberg, Christina Sng, Daryl WJ Lim, Jerrold Yam, Desmond Kon

Lontar Launch with Jason Erik Lundberg, Christina Sng, Daryl WJ Lim, Jerrold Yam, Desmond Kon

 Raising the profile of Asian literature  Laksmi Pamuntjak, Linh Dinh & Desmond Kon  Eun Heekyung & Koh Jee Leong  Launch of Deeds of Light & The End Comes Reaching  Joshua Ip moderating David Wong & Tse Hao Guan  SWF Oct Nov 2015-5.jpg  Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip plotting the downfall of nations  Kenny Leck & Joshua Ip  Kenny Leck & Sarah Tang aka Wednesday Addams  Hau Huang & David signing their debut poetry collections SWF Oct Nov 2015-9.jpg  Words over Water with Ghazali Muzak, Michael Cheng, Verena Tay & Dee Palanisamy SWF Oct Nov 2015-11.jpg  MIchael Cheng  Verena Tay SWF Oct Nov 2015-16.jpg  Michael Cheng  Verena Tay & her mother SWF Oct Nov 2015-18.jpg  Words over Water  Short does not mean easy  Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden SWF Oct Nov 2015-23.jpg  Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau, Ken Liu & Philip Holden  Anthology of Short Stories by NAC ITBM Yayasan Obor  It Never Rains on National Day  Jeremy Tiang, Desmond Kon & Joshua Ip  Verena Tay  Kenny Chan & Alvin Pang  Alvin Pang, co-editor of Union  UNION with Fong Hoe Fang, Alvin Pang & Ravi Shankar SWF Oct Nov 2015-33.jpg  Ravi Shankar & Chandran Nair  Andy Ang  Annaliza Bakri reads Mohamed Latiff Mohamed  Rafaat Haji Hamzah SWF Oct Nov 2015-30.jpg  Verena Tay  Ann Ang SWF Oct Nov 2015-34.jpg  Jason Erik Lundberg  Bashir Basalamah & his daughter  Jerrold Yam & Desmond Kon in conversation ... something about conceptual poetry (the prose writer's eyes glazed over)  Lontar Launch with Jason Erik Lundberg, Christina Sng, Daryl WJ Lim, Jerrold Yam, Desmond Kon

Singapore Writers Festival 2015 - The first few days

November 02, 2015 in Singapore, Writing, #SGLit

Images from the sessions I attended at Singapore Writers Festival on 31 Oct to 1 Nov 2015.

I enjoyed hanging out with Verena and Desmond (thanks for the Shiraz), and catching up with other friends (old and new).

Thanks Stephanie very much for mentioning We Rose Up Slowly (available in SWF shop under 'J') on the Short Doesn't Mean Easy panel.

Tags: Singapore, SWF, Writers, SingaporeWritersFestival, Singlit, Singapore Writers
Lenteng Agung, Jakarta Selatan, Oct 2015

Lenteng Agung, Jakarta Selatan, Oct 2015

Lady at Home Beneath a Picture of Galloping Horses, Jakarta

October 30, 2015 in Indonesia, #SGLit

We arrived back home this week after introducing the baby to the Jakarta relatives. Just in time for Singapore Writer's Festival where my book, We Rose Up Slowly, is on sale in the Festival Bookshop or you can buy it from me or online.

I'll try and get to (baby permitting):

31 Oct 4pm - Launch of Tse Hao Guang & David Wong's poetry books
31 Oct 730pm - Words Over Water with Verena Tay on the Singapore river
1 Nov 1130am - Short Does Not Mean Easy with Stephanie Ye, Daren Shiau & Ken Liu
1 Nov 230pm - Launch of Union by Ravi Shankar & Alf Pang
1 Nov 4pm - Launch of It Never Rains on National Day by Jeremy Tiang
1 Nov 7pm - Launch of Lontar & BNSS Vol 2
4 Nov 830pm - Launch of poetry.sg & SingPoWriMo
5 Nov 8pm - Dimensions & Demons with Dave Chua, Stephanie Ye & Daren Shiau
7 Nov 230pm - Critical Stage - Literary Reviews with O Thiam Chin, Stephanie Ye, Aaron Lee & Jeremy Tiang
7 Nov 4pm - Fluid Identities of SEA with Kennie Ting & Elisabeth Pisani
8 Nov 230pm - Among Us: Migrant worker poets
8 Nov 7pm - This House Believes Singaporeans are not Dreamers - Debate

Tags: Indonesia, Jakarta, Lenteng Agung, Horse
Next door Neighbour;s kid, Jakarta Selatan 2014

Next door Neighbour;s kid, Jakarta Selatan 2014

Rashid at The Sail

October 10, 2015 in Indonesia, WRUS, Writing, #SGLit

"He remembered when he was a child, maybe about nine years old, massaging his mother’s feet. Pressing his little thumbs into her rough, calloused flesh as hard as he could. Feeling the warmth and softness beneath the dry, crackled skin and trying to smooth out all her tension and worry. When did the quiet comfort in each other’s company disappear? He loved his mother. Very much. It was just that she loved his brother more."

Excerpt from Rashid at The Sail, a story in my book, We Rose Up Slowly

You can buy We Rose Up Slowly here (free shipping in Singapore).

Tags: Jakarta, Indonesia, SGLit, WRUS, We Rose Up Slowly, Rashid at The Sail
Sophia at one month having a bath, July 2015

Sophia at one month having a bath, July 2015

My Writing Process - The Ideal

September 30, 2015 in Writing, WRUS

I thought it might be useful to set out the 'ideal' writing process I sought to apply in writing the stories in We Rose Up Slowly. Setting it out this way suggests I took a highly disciplined and organised approach. This is in fact a lie and does not do justice to my messy, chaotic and doubt ridden reality. I don't write in a linear fashion - I have ideas and sentences flying all over the place at various stages of development and quality - so I need an 'ideal' process to aspire to. Even if I never achieve the 'ideal', a little process and structure to my writing process helps. 

What's your approach? I'd love to share notes.

My Writing Process

A. Capture

A1. In Notebook by hand: 
1) Capture ideas, thoughts, scenes, events, conflicts, characters, observations, outline of stories. Dreams. Snippets. Passing conversations. Lines from movies. Bus trips. Get everything down. Don't judge or self censor.

A2. Digital capture:
2) Dictate thoughts & make notes on iPhone Notepad
3) Have an Ideas text file on iPhone to dump links, news articles, quotes, ideas etc - I tried to use Evernote but it was just to slow in syncing

A3. Filter Captured Notes into a workable form
4) Transcribe/dictate into Scrivener or iPhone notepad the handwritten notes & ideas I want to work on further. Highlight sentences, characters, quotes that stand out from the dross. Think about links, connections, common themes, interesting juxtapositions, contrasts, light and shade. Order & reorder.

B. Build the story

I use Scrivener a lot during this stage to work out what I want to say in a story & how to say it.

B1. First Draft
1) Using the outcome of A: write a quick first draft focussing on mood & tone. Do not worry about plot holes, logical contradictions, spelling, grammar or if sentences are correct. Use placeholders where you know there are gaps. Don't edit, judge or self censor.
DO NOT WORRY IF IT IS HORRIBLE - MOST OF IT WILL BE CRAP AT THIS STAGE (& PROBABLY, FOR A LOT LONGER)
2) Summarise what happens in each scene in the story in one or two lines. 

B2. Research
3) Read & research key factual aspects of the story e.g. profession, setting, events, type of person, history etc
4) Put links, quotes, articles etc in Scrivener Research section

B3: Discover the Story
5) Does the plot make sense? What's the key conflict & how is this addressed & resolved in the story? Is another scene, event or character missing? Who wants/yearns for what? How are they challenged? What happens in the end? Look for connections & common concerns & themes. Don't worry if you don't have complete answers to these 'story' questions: Use placeholders where questions remain open.
6) Rearrange, build & develop scenes to make a story, conflicts & character in Scrivener
7) Rewrite, revise, edit - like waves over sand & onto rock - keep going, read, revise and reread the text again
8) Use Plaintext with Scrivener to facilitate writing, revising & editing on mobile & iPad

B4. Discover the Characters
9) Imagine what its like to be each of your main characters. Write their POV.
10) Ask what  are their desires/wants/yearning? How do they change & why do they change over the course of the story? Is their narrative momentum? Does the writing make you want to find out what happens next?
11) Keep asking questions about the characters, yearnings & challenges, the conflict, the structure, the dialogue, what works, whats irrelevant, who grows & why, epiphany etc etc
12) Is POV consistent? 
13) Do physically logistics make sense within the rules of the story?
14) Is there too much or too little of any of the characters?

B5. Beginning & Ending
15) Does the story start with a compelling scene which cuts to the core of the story?
16) How are key conflicts resolved at the end? Where do the characters end up? Have they changed? What questions are left open at the ending?
17) What questions does the text raise? How are these answered, or not answered, in the text?
18) Is their unity of theme, effect & purpose in the writing?

C. Let the story sit for a week or more

D. Further Revisions

D1. Initial Revisions
1) Are there extra words, sentences that are clunky or don't make sense? 
2) Cut out 10-20% of words to distil the essence of the story to a concentrated unity. Does every scene, sentence, description, observation help progress the story? If not, delete.
3) Is story and character clear? Are any ambiguous parts of the story distracting? Which parts need more clarity & focus - which parts are best left ambiguous & blurred?
4) Dictate the latest draft of the story onto your iPhone & listen to what it sounds like. Check rhythm, pace, dialogue etc - revise further
5) Run spell check & grammar check. Look for nearby duplicate words, bad grammar & typos. Delete "-ly" words & remove unnecessary adverbs.
6) Cut and paste from Scrivener into word.  
7) Print it out & review the physical printed word on the page
8) Finish a draft - this is a reasonable working draft but still may require major surgery

D2. Later Revisions
9) Send to a few friends who read my stuff. Ask them which bits they like & which bits they don't, where they lost interest, what is unclear, doesn't make sense. Get their feedback in writing, don't get defensive, incorporate their written input into the draft after thinking it through objectively.
Yu-Mei Balasinghamchow close read a draft of We Rose Up Slowly which was invaluable.
10) Put the story in a drawer for at least 2 months - then reread as though it were someone elses work & revise again either in Word, or cut & past back into Scrivener if deeper work is needed. 
11) Don't be afraid to go back to B3. and rework your story and characters again.

D3. Use a Professional Editor
12) Get the input of a professional editor for story advice more than grammar - Stephanie Ye was a wonderful editor on We Rose Up Slowly : Full of wisdom, common sense & experience. I highly recommend her as an editor.
13) Revise, polish & finish

Why writing a book is not like having a baby.

Tags: Writing, We Rose Up Slowly, SGLit
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Haider, Nysilla, Kamilla, Wah Wah, Jakarta 2014

Haider, Nysilla, Kamilla, Wah Wah, Jakarta 2014

Cousins, Jakarta

September 27, 2015 in Family & Friends, Indonesia

We shall head to Jakarta in a week or two - not just to escape the haze but to introduce all the cousins to Sophia.

More images from Jakarta can be found here, & other parts of Indonesia here.

The background to one of my stories, A Girl & a Guy in a Kijang in Kemang, set in Jakarta can be found here.

Tags: Indonesia, Jakarta, Family
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